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WICCCKED!

I look forward to reviewing this Karlito!
Predictions: Rhodes to RAW. Jericho and Cena to Smackdown? Sheamus and Bryan to RAW? Ziggler to Smackdown.

Veteran Posts : 3039 Age : 27 Location : Hogwarts

I see Rhodes, Daniel Bryan, Christian and Orton going to Raw. Ziggler, Swagger, Cena, Ryder and Riley going to SD!

Executive Posts : 3205 Age : 30 Location : Canada

Karlito, I wish to do your graphics for Over the Limit, when Match are annonced!?
Accepted? or Denied?

Hall of Famer Posts : 5979 Age : 27

Accepted! Two matches have already been announced so you can make them first. Wink

Interesting predictions so far from everyone.

Executive Posts : 3205 Age : 30 Location : Canada

Hall of Famer Posts : 5979 Age : 27

Since it's Monday here already and I can't sleep, I think I may just post the show now.

Executive Posts : 3205 Age : 30 Location : Canada

DO IT!

Founder Posts : 1494

Haven't read through your stuff yet but I'd just like to welcome you back to the section and I think you've made a wise choice in going with WWE as I firmly believe that is where your strength lies and it has the roster you're most comfortable with. Best of luck Karl.
-Adam

Hall of Famer Posts : 5979 Age : 27

Thanks Adam, I hope to get some solid reviews from you at some point, your feedback is always welcome.

Hall of Famer Posts : 5979 Age : 27

May 7th 2012

[RAW opens up with the sound of screaming fans and explosions of pyro mixing together. Burn It To The Ground kicks in and the opening video plays over the titantron. The music stops just as the music of Dolph Ziggler blares through the speakers. He struts down to the ring in his ring gear with a pink shawl hanging out from the back of his trunks reading ‘Show Off’. He jumps onto the apron and is handed a microphone before he enters the ring.]

|The Show-Off | | Dolph Ziggler | | The Show-Off|
“I am sure you all want to know why I absolutely destroyed CM Punk last week. Well my explanation is simple but a little long winded so bear with me. Since I came to this company every single person in the WWE Universe knew that I was destined for greatness and it was obvious that I was the greatest technical wrestler to come into this business in a long time.”

[There are a few murmurs of agreement in the crowd but the majority of fans boo his words.]

|The Show-Off | | Dolph Ziggler | | The Show-Off|
“Whether you love me or hate me you know it’s true! Right now I should be at the top of the food chain; I should be the WWE Champion. I would be if it weren’t for guys like CM Punk.”

[Ziggler looks out at the fans, shaking his head at their jeers.]

|The Show-Off | | Dolph Ziggler | | The Show-Off|
“Again, you know it’s true. Guys like CM Punk, John Cena, Randy Orton – the list goes on – are intent on making sure them and them alone are at the top of the food chain. They don’t give us younger guys a chance to shine, hell they barely give us any air time. This time last year CM Punk was ready to leave the company and it wasn’t the fans that brought him back, it was the fact that he was getting a bigger pay cheque which kept him on your screens.”

[The fans continue to boo as Ziggler laughs.]

|The Show-Off | | Dolph Ziggler | | The Show-Off|
“I know, it is utterly shocking. I’ve had enough of being walked over so last week I decided to make a statement. I cost CM Punk a shot at the WWE Championship because he doesn’t deserve it. I made sure that he didn’t get a shot at the Championship which I deserve. I made sure he-”

Look In My Eyes, What Do You See? Cult Of Personality!

[There are resounding cheers as the music of the former WWE Champion, CM Punk, blares through the speakers. CM Punk walks out onto the stage in his trunks and top and stares down at Ziggler in the ring. Ziggler smirks at Punk and that does it, Punk charges down the ramp and slides in the ring just as Ziggler cowardly scurries to the outside. Punk goes to chase after him but is interrupted by the voice of John Laurinaitis. Punk turns around and Laurinaitis stands on the stage, flanked as always by David Otunga.]

|Executive Vice President Of Talent Relations & RAW And Smackdown General Manager | | John Laurinaitis | | Executive Vice President Of Talent Relations & RAW And Smackdown General Manager|
“Punk, Punk, Punk stop right there! Don’t you dare touch Dolph Ziggler. In case you didn’t know, tonight is the WWE draft and it is the night where the brands stick together so you two shouldn’t be fighting against each other, you should be fighting with each other. I understand that you two want to fight each other but do me a favour and wait until Over The Limit and you two can have a match there. As for tonight, Punk you will be competing later on tonight but Dolph you have a match right now!”

[Punk gives Ziggler one last week and tells him he will see him at Over The Limit before turning and leaving the ring. By the time he and Laurinaitis have went backstage, Ziggler is standing in the ring waiting on his opponent. WEEEEELLL, WELL IT’S THE BIG SHOW! Ziggler’s jaw drops and the fans jump to their feet as The World’s Largest Athlete storms out onto the stage. He panders to the crowd as he makes his way down the ramp and gets in the ring, ready for this match.]

DING! DING! DING!

[Show goes straight on the attack as soon as the bell rings and backs Ziggler into the corner by grabbing him by the throat. Show motions for the crowd to be silent but as he goes for his signature chop, Ziggler sneaks out under his arm and runs to the other side of the ring. Show runs after him but Ziggler hits a low dropkick to the knee of Show, bringing him down to one knee. Ziggler goes to kick Show in the side of the head but Show catches his leg and pushes him back. However, before Show can get up Ziggler springs back to his feet and hits a big superkick square on the jaw of the big man. Show falls to his back and Ziggler quickly makes the cover for a 2 count. Ziggler gets back to his feet and kicks Show hard in the face, making sure he’ll stay down. Ziggler walks over to the ropes and looks out at the fans with a sly grin on his face. He turns and stalks Show as he begins to rise. Just as Show is almost to his feet and Ziggler is getting ready to presumably hit the Zig Zag, Punk jumps the barrier from the crowd and slides in the ring. He charges at Ziggler and ducks under a clothesline attempt from Ziggler before sliding right out of the ring. Ziggler turns his attention away from Show for a split second but by the time he has turned back to face the giant his hand is already clocked and he is laid out with a huge WMD. Show drops down on top of Ziggler for the 1..2..3!]

DING! DING! DING!

|RAW Ring Announcer | | Justin Roberts | | RAW Ring Announcer|
“Ladies and Gentlemen your winner, earning Smackdown one draft pick, The Big Show!”

[Show gets back to his feet and raises his arm in triumph as the formalities begin for the first draft pick of the night.]

[There are loud cheers as Kofi Kingston is displayed on the titantron. His music begins to play and the newest Smackdown superstar runs out onto the stage. He does his signature hand clapping taunt before pointing down at an applauding Big Show in the ring. The camera cuts backstage as Kofi continues celebrating on the stage.]

~

[There are huge cheers heard from the crowd as Kharma is seen walking around backstage. She has her head down but you can distinctly hear a very quiet murmuring. She snaps her head up and stares directly at the camera for a few seconds before bowing her head once more and walking off in the opposite direction.]

~

[The fans cheer once again as Sheamus is shown backstage, walking down the corridor acknowledging everyone as he passes. He goes to round a corner but is stopped in his tracks by the former World Heavyweight Champion, Daniel Bryan. The ‘YES!’ chants coming from the crowd are very audible as Bryan looks him up and down and sniggers before speaking.]

|The Submission Specialist | | Daniel Bryan | | The Submission Specialist|
“Sheamus, tonight may be your lucky night. You see if one of us is drafted to RAW then you won’t have to worry about me taking that Championship from you anymore. It’s a shame really, just as I thought we were starting to become friends this comes between us. Better keep your fingers crossed Sheamus, otherwise you won’t be Champion for much longer.”

[Bryan pats Sheamus on the shoulder and walks off down the corridor, leaving Sheamus staring after him.]

~

[We come back to the ring where Smackdown’s Tamina is waiting on her opponent for this next draft match. Tamina looks ready to run as the maniacal laugh rings around the arena. The fans are on their feet as Kharma slowly walks out onto the stage, ready to make her in ring debut. She stops on the stage and throws off her shoulder pads before making her way down the ramp. She gets in the ring and stands opposite Tamina, waiting on the bell ringing.]

DING! DING! DING!

[Tamina charges at Kharma for a clothesline but she doesn’t budge, she doesn’t even react to getting hit. Tamina backs up and slaps Kharma across the face, once again failing to gain a reaction from this monstrosity. Tamina turns her back to Kharma, looking for some inspiration. Tamina turns around but is instantly decked with a big clothesline from Kharma. Kharma drags Tamina to her feet and grabs her by the throat with both hands. She hoists her up into the air and throws her over her head, causing Tamina to land awkwardly in the centre of the ring. Kharma proceeds to charge off the ropes and hits a big splash on Tamina getting the 1..2..3!]

DING! DING! DING!

|RAW Ring Announcer | | Justin Roberts | | RAW Ring Announcer|
“Here is your winner, gaining one draft pick for RAW, Kharma!”

[Kharma gets back to her feet, an evil grin spreading across her face. Tamina rolls over to the ropes and attempts to drag herself up as the draft is about to be announced.]

[The fans give a small cheer as Tamina is shown on the titantron. Tamina, who has just managed to get to her feet, looks up at the titantron shocked and when her eyes rest on Kharma they turn to a look of fear. She turns to leave the ring but Kharma charges for her and grabs her tights before she can leave. Kharma drags Tamina back into the centre of the ring and grabs Tamina’s head before thrusting it between her legs. She hooks her arms before hoisting her up into the air and slamming her back down with Bad Kharma. Kharma gets back to her feet and looks down at Tamina before being interrupted by the music of Beth Phoenix. Phoenix walks out onto the stage in a dress and heals with her Divas Championship strung over her shoulder. Kharma turns and stares at the Divas Champion and both divas stare each other down as the scene fades to black.]

~

[Cody Rhodes stands, leaning on a crate, bragging to a random crew worker about how he is the greatest Champion in the WWE right now. The crew worker doesn’t get a chance to speak as Rhodes just continually talks about himself over and over. Santino Marella walks over behind Rhodes and listens on his conversation. Finally, Rhodes finishes his conversation and turns to leave but is met by Santino Marella.]

|United States Champion | | Santino Marella | | United States Champion|
“Cody, Cody, Cody I think you are slightly wrong on one thing. I am the greatest Champion in the WWE right now and it’s not just me that thinks so, just ask the Cobra.”

[Santino reaches inside his singlet, as if going for the Cobra but Cody stops him.]

|Intercontinental Champion | | Cody Rhodes | | Intercontinental Champion|
“Save it Santino, we’re going to find out who is the better Champion in a couple of minutes because we are going one on one and the winner gets two draft picks for their brand. Good luck, see you out there.”

~

[A few minutes later we come back to the ring just as Santino Marella is power walking down to the ring with the United States Championship wrapped around his waist. He gets in the ring and out next is Cody Rhodes with the Intercontinental Championship wrapped firmly around his waist. He gets in the ring and both men hand over their Championships as they get ready for this match.]

DING! DING! DING!

[Both men lock up in the centre of the ring with Rhodes gaining the advantage. Rhodes shoves Santino back and kicks him in the midsection before nailing a DDT. Rhodes gets back up and kicks Santino hard in the side of his ribs before dropping down and raining punches down on the United States Champion. Rhodes gets to his feet and pulls at his hair as a slight insane looking grin spreads across his face. He turns to pick up Santino but Santino kicks Rhodes hard in the gut and drags him down into a small package for a 2 count. Rhodes kicks out and jumps to his feet at the same time as Santino. Rhodes goes to clothesline but Santino catches it and throws Rhodes over him in a hip toss. Santino springs on Rhodes for the cover but only gets a 1 count before Rhodes throws Santino off of him. Both men get back to their feet and Rhodes goes for a dropkick but Santino sidesteps it. Rhodes hits the ground hard and Santino reaches into his singlet for what one must assume is the Cobra. He pulls the Cobra out and places it on his hand before shouting for the Cobra. Rhodes gets up and Santino goes for the Cobra but Rhodes ducks underneath and springs off the ropes before nailing the Beautiful Disaster for the 1..2..3!]

DING! DING! DING!

|RAW Ring Announcer | | Justin Roberts | | RAW Ring Announcer|
“Here is your winner, gaining TWO draft picks for Smackdown, Cody Rhodes!”

[Rhodes gets to his feet, a cocky smirk on his face as the formalities begin for the two draft picks.]

[The fans literally go wild as Zack Ryder is displayed on the titantron. OH RADIO! Zack Ryder limps out onto the stage, obviously still sore from his inferno match with Kane at Extreme Rules. He fist pumps for the crowd before disappearing backstage as the draft machine starts again.]

[The reaction to this draft is twice that of Zack Ryder’s as Chris Jericho is displayed on the titantron. The entire commentary team sit in shock as the WWE Champion walks out onto the stage as the biggest draftee of the night. He looks around at the fans with a sly grin on his face and shrugs his shoulders as if to say he doesn’t care. The camera fades to black as the fans chant Jericho’s name.]

[We come back to the ring with John Cena standing with a microphone in hand.]

|The Cenation Leader | | John Cena | | The Cenation Leader|
“Moments ago Chris Jericho was drafted to Smackdown and with him goes the WWE Championship. Many people may be sitting at home thinking that this means RAW will be left with no World title but that’s not the case because at Over The Limit I will defeat Chris Jericho and I will bring the WWE Championship back to RAW.”

[The fans give Cena a loud pop for this heavy statement.]

|The Cenation Leader | | John Cena | | The Cenation Leader|
“I haven’t held the WWE Championship for over seven months. After I lost the WWE Championship to Alberto Del Rio my focus was held elsewhere and it is just now that I finally have the chance to focus on becoming The Champ once more. Chris Jericho better start kissing that Championship goodbye because in a couple of weeks it won’t be his.”

[Cena drops the mic and poses for the fans as the camera fades.]

~

[The fans begin to boo as the scene opens up in John Laurinaitis’ office where the General Manager is standing, ready to speak to the fans.]

|Executive Vice President Of Talent Relations And RAW & Smackdown General Manager | | John Laurinaitis | | Executive Vice President Of Talent Relations And RAW & Smackdown General Manager|
“Ladies and Gentlemen I hope tonight has been fantastic so far and the excitement will continue over on to Wednesday at noon when the Supplemental Draft will be held. Make sure to go on to WWE.com to get the result of this draft and remember; People Power!”

[The boos are deafening as Laurinaitis grins into a fading screen.]

~

[We come back to the ring and Ricardo Rodriguez introduces Alberto Del Rio for this draft match. Del Rio drives out and takes his time coming down to the ring before Booker T comes out to represent Smackdown. Both men are in the ring now and this match gets underway.]

DING! DING! DING!

[As soon as the bell rings Del Rio goes straight for Booker but Booker sees him coming and takes him out with a stiff super kick. Del Rio doesn’t take long to get back up but his confidence is obviously shaken. Del Rio and Booker stalk each other and Del Rio lunges for Booker’s leg but Booker kicks him back forcefully. Del Rio is starting to get frustrated and Booker sees this as an opportunity, kicking him in the midsection before shoving him into the corner. Booker goes for a clothesline but Del Rio moves out of the way and Booker hits the corner hard. As Booker stumbles back, Del Rio grabs his head and throws it back onto his knee. Del Rio covers Booker but he kicks out at two and Del Rio decides to turn his attention to the arm of Booker. He gets up and viciously stomps away at the arm before jumping up and dropping a knee down on top of it. Booker pulls his arm back in pain as Del Rio smugly grins out to the crowd. Booker begins to rise and Del Rio turns, grabs Booker’s arm and jumps into the air before slamming down with Booker’s arm hitting the knees of Del Rio. Booker writhes in pain and Del Rio gets up, more confident than before. Booker begins getting up and Del Rio grabs his arm before rolling over and locking the Arm Bar. Booker struggles around for a few minutes before finally giving in and tapping out.]

DING! DING! DING!

|RAW Ring Announcer | | Justin Roberts | | RAW Ring Announcer|
“Here is your winner, gaining one draft pick for RAW, Alberto Del Rio!”

[Del Rio continues to pull at Booker’s arm, locking in the Arm Bar tighter and tighter. A referee rushes in the ring to break this up as the draft formalities begin.]

[There are both boos and cheers as Wade Barrett is displayed on the titantron. His music hits and the Englishman walks out onto the stage with his arm in a sling. He looks down at the ring as Del Rio releases his hold on Booker. The two have a sort of stare down as we cut backstage.]

~

[Alex Riley sits on a crate, listening to a crew worker as he informs him of his match with Mark Henry later on tonight. The worker walks off, leaving Riley alone with his thoughts. Riley jumps off the crate and goes to walk off but Mark Henry blocks his way.]

|The World’s Strongest Man | | Mark Henry | | The World’s Strongest Man|
“I take it you know about our match later on? You better start saying your goodbyes kid because whether you get drafted tonight or not, this will be your last night on RAW and your last night in the WWE.”

[Henry shoves Riley out of his way and storms off down the corridor as Riley leans on the wall, holding his face in his hands.]

~

[The camera opens up in a luxurious looking locker room where Brock Lesnar is sitting on a very comfortable looking suite. There is a large plasma screen television positioned in front of the suite giving Brock the best possible view on the ring in the arena. On the screen we can see Randy Orton walking down the ramp and the camera cuts to the ring.]

~

[Orton is now in the ring and David Otunga is slowly making his way out. He gets in the ring and stands opposite Orton as they both await the bell.]

DING! DING! DING!

[Otunga goes to clothesline Orton but Orton sees it coming and ducks underneath before turning and hitting Otunga with a stiff right hand. Otunga stumbles back and Orton responds with a second right hand which forces Otunga into the corner. Orton takes a few steps back and charges at Otunga, hitting him with a big clothesline. Orton takes a step back and Otunga begins falling so Orton grabs him and hits a belly to belly suplex. Orton hooks the leg of Otunga but he kicks out just after the count of two. Orton gets back up and drags Otunga up as well before kicking him in the midsection and hitting a DDT. Orton gets up and begins stalking Otunga, obviously planning on ending this one early. Otunga manages to get to his feet and turns around into a big RKO from Orton. Orton rolls Otunga over onto his back and gets the 1..2..3!]

DING! DING! DING!

|RAW Ring Announcer | | Justin Roberts | | RAW Ring Announcer|
“Here is your winner, gaining one draft for Smackdown, Randy Orton!”

[Orton gets to his feet and jumps to the second rope, raising his arms in the air in celebration. He jumps down and looks up at the titantron, waiting on the draft pick.]

[Orton’s face drops as Kane is displayed on the titantron. The music hits and out comes the Big Red Machine to both cheers and boos from the crowd. He takes off his entrance mask and drops it on the stage before jogging down the ramp. He slides in the ring and takes Orton down with a big boot to the face. He picks up Otunga and grabs him by the throat just as Orton begins rising. Orton gets up and turns into Kane who grabs him by the throat with his free hand. He lifts both men into the air and hits a huge double Chokeslam. Kane stands above the two fallen bodies and lifts his arms in the air before bringing them back down as fire explodes in the four corners. The camera cuts backstage as Kane looks into the camera with a sadistic look on his face.]

~

[The camera cuts backstage to see Wade Barrett arrive into the arena wearing a blue shirt and smart trousers with his right arm in a sling. He looks around with a grin on his face before walking off down the corridor.]

~

[We come back to the ring as Alex Riley is making his way out. He goes around the ring, slapping hands with the fans, before getting in as Mark Henry’s music hits. Henry does his usual ominous entrance and takes his time before getting in the ring opposite Riley.]

DING! DING! DING!

[Henry goes straight for Riley as soon as he hears the bell and squashes Riley in the corner. Henry takes a step back and Riley begins to fall down but Henry snatches him and throws him over his head. Riley lands awkwardly on his arm and the fans boo as Henry points and laughs at him. Henry walks over to pick up Riley but as he bends over, Riley drags him down and gets him in a tight small package for the 1..2..3!]

DING! DING! DING!

|RAW Ring Announcer | | Justin Roberts | | RAW Ring Announcer|
“Here is your winner, gaining RAW one draft pick, Alex Riley!”

[The fans are in utter shock as Riley jumps to his feet and punches the air in celebration. Riley mockingly stretches his arm, showing the fans and Mark Henry that he was playing possum. Riley scurries out of the ring and Henry chases him up the ramp and to the back as the draft pick is about to be made.]

[There are small cheers but larger boos as Drew McIntyre is displayed on the titantron. The music of the Scotsman hits and out he comes onto the stage. Justin Roberts announces that Drew McIntyre will now be competing in a match representing RAW. McIntyre gets in the ring and Justin Gabriel is out next to represent Smackdown. Gabriel is quick at getting into the ring and stands opposite McIntyre, ready for this match.]

DING! DING! DING!

[McIntyre gets straight down to business and kicks Gabriel in the midsection before hitting him with a clubbing blow to the back of the head. Gabriel hits the mat and McIntyre proceeds to stomp away at the body of his opponent. McIntyre rolls Gabriel onto his back and makes the cover but Gabriel kicks out and quickly gets to his feet. McIntyre gets up as well and Gabriel goes to kick McIntyre in the side of the head but McIntyre catches it and throws Gabriel back. McIntyre charges at Gabriel for the clothesline but Gabriel ducks underneath and waits for McIntyre to turn around before hitting him with a big dropkick which sends him reeling into the corner. Gabriel charges at McIntyre and kicks him in the side of the head, bringing McIntyre down to the mat. Gabriel rolls McIntyre onto his back and makes the cover but only gets a 2 count for his efforts. Gabriel gets to his feet and drags McIntyre up with him but McIntyre breaks out of Gabriel’s hold and hits Gabriel with a stiff right hand to the jaw. Gabriel grabs his jaw and stumbles back and McIntyre kicks him in the knee before hooking his arms and hastily hitting the Future Shock DDT for the 1..2..3!]

DING! DING! DING!

|RAW Ring Announcer | | Justin Roberts | | RAW Ring Announcer|
“Here is your winner, gaining one brand pick for RAW, Drew McIntyre!”

[The fans boo as McIntyre gets to his feet with his right arm raised in victory. The commentator mentions that McIntyre just made a good first impression here on RAW and we are about to find out who he has won for the brand.]

[As Ezekiel Jackson is displayed on the titantron, there are loud cheers of approval from the fans. Jackson slowly walks out onto the stage and grins out at the fans as they chant his name. He looks down at McIntyre in the ring and winks at him as we go backstage.]

~

[John Laurinaitis stands in his office alongside David Otunga, both of which are watching everything that is happening in the ring on screen. Laurinaitis turns to Otunga with an exasperated look on his face.]

|Executive Vice President Of Talent Relations And RAW & Smackdown General Manager | | John Laurinaitis | | Executive Vice President Of Talent Relations And RAW & Smackdown General Manager|
“You know David, all of this is really not as good as I thought it would be.”

|John Laurinaitis’ Legal Counsel | | David Otunga | | John Laurinaitis’ Legal Counsel|
“What do you mean sir?”

|Executive Vice President Of Talent Relations And RAW & Smackdown General Manager | | John Laurinaitis | | Executive Vice President Of Talent Relations And RAW & Smackdown General Manager|
“Oh I don’t know David, it was just more fun running the one show.”

[Laurinaitis shakes his head and turns his attention back to his phone where he begins texting away furiously.]

[A promo video airs promoting The Rock’s return to RAW next week.]

[We come back to the ring and it is time for the big match; a 10 Man Battle Royal with the winner gaining his brand 2 draft picks. Out first is Team Smackdown with World Heavyweight Champion Sheamus leading out Daniel Bryan along with new recruits Kane, Zack Ryder and the WWE Champion Chris Jericho. The five men get in the ring and out next is CM Punk leading out Team RAW’s John Cena, Lord Tensai, Brodus Clay and The Miz. The five of them get in the ring and these two surprising combinations look set to square off.]

DING! DING! DING!

[As soon as the bell rings, mayhem instantly ensues. Both teams collide in the centre of the ring and rights and lefts begin to get thrown around. Packs begin to break out and Kane backs Cena into a corner where he begins to beat him down with vicious rights while Tensai works away on Ryder in the opposite corner. Clay has Bryan up on his shoulders and is attempting to get him over the top rope as Sheamus does the same to Miz. Meanwhile, Punk and Jericho trade blow after blow in the centre of the ring. Kane goes to clothesline Cena over the top rope but Cena manages to duck underneath and thrusts Kane over the top rope and to the floor.]

Kane has been eliminated!

[Kane gets to his feet on the outside, looking shocked – well, at least that’s as much as it is possible to tell through a mask. Cena laughs at him in the ring and turns, surveying the action going on in the ring. Punk and Jericho are now up against the ropes and both are doing the best to get the other over the ropes. Clay has Bryan on the apron but Bryan is doing his utmost to fight back and get in the ring. Bryan catches Clay with a hard kick to the side and Clay stumbles back, giving Bryan the chance to scurry back in the ring. Meanwhile, Tensai has Ryder in some form of submission hold and Ryder is screaming out in pain. Sheamus has Miz in the corner and is attempting to get him over the top rope so Cena decides to go over and stop him. Tensai now has Ryder up on the top rope and has locked his hand on the temple of Ryder. Ryder is trying his best to fight back but Tensai overpowers him and pushes Ryder to the outside with all his strength.]

Zack Ryder has been eliminated!

[The commentators note that Smackdown are now down to 3 men while RAW remain at 5. Tensai, not caring about the point of this match, walks over and throws Clay aside before taking down Bryan with a wild rotating elbow. Clay gets back to his feet and spins Tensai around, getting into his face. The two argue with each other before finally Tensai slaps Clay across the face. Clay looks back at Tensai and hits him with a hard right which starts the two of them off trading blows. Cena sees this and runs over to stop them but both turn to him and grab him by the head before tossing him over the top rope.]

John Cena has been eliminated!

[Clay and Tensai go back to fighting away and Tensai eventually gains the upper hand. Tensai shoves Clay into the corner and goes to clothesline him but Clay ducks underneath and tosses him over. Tensai lands on the apron and waits for Clay to turn around before locking his hand across the temple of Clay. He pulls Clay onto the apron and the two begin fighting away once again. Sheamus sees his chance and charges over, knocking both men off of the apron with a double clothesline.]

Lord Tensai and Brodus Clay have been eliminated!

[The commentators convey their shock of RAW going from two men up to one man down in the space of two minutes. Miz is now being worked on in the corner by Sheamus while Jericho and Bryan wear down Punk against the ropes. Bryan gets Jericho up on his feet and holds him back while Jericho continually slaps him across the face and chest. Bryan releases Punk and lets him stumble forward a little bit before kicking him hard in the side of the head. Punk falls to the mat and Jericho and Bryan take a moment to catch their breath as Sheamus attempts to get Miz over the top rope. Punk and Bryan pick Punk up and they both go to throw Punk over but Punk manages to escape at the last minute and instead grabs Jericho by the tights and tosses him over the top rope.]

Chris Jericho has been eliminated!

[Bryan turns as Punk charges at him but he manages to move out of the way and Punk turns around right into a kick in the head which sends him toppling over the top rope. He lands on the apron but Jericho grabs his foot and drags him outside with him.]

CM Punk has been eliminated!

[Miz, now the sole RAW competitor, finally manages to escape the hold of Sheamus and scurries into the corner. Sheamus goes straight after him once again and both men trade blows in the corner. Bryan stands in the centre of the ring, watching the action, and begins screaming “YES” out to the fans. The chant soon catches on and the entire arena is joining in. Sheamus gains control over Miz and Bryan comes over to join him. Miz pushes both men away and Sheamus stands next to the ropes, laughing at Miz. He goes to go after Miz again but is distracted as Bryan charges at him. Sheamus ducks underneath a clothesline and runs off the ropes before coming back with a huge Brogue Kick which sends Bryan toppling over the top rope.]

Daniel Bryan has been eliminated!

[Miz capitalises on this distraction and sneaks up behind Sheamus, picking him up and dumping him on the outside.]

DING! DING! DING!

|RAW Ring Announcer | | Justin Roberts | | RAW Ring Announcer|
“Ladies and Gentlemen the sole survivor for Team RAW, winning RAW two draft picks, The Miz!”

[Miz instantly jumps to the second rope and smirks out at the booing fans. Bryan runs up the ramp to get away from Sheamus, laughing at him as he does so. Miz stands in the ring, watching Sheamus stand at the bottom of the ramp, fuming after Bryan. Eventually, the draft machine gets going and we are ready for the second last draft pick of the night.]

[“YES” chants rain around the arena as Daniel Bryan is displayed on the titantron. Bryan begins to scream “YES” at the top of his voice and does his usual pointing in the air as he jumps up and down on the spot. Bryan does this while walking backstage as the machine starts up again.]

[The fans are in shock as Sheamus is displayed on the titantron. The shock begins to pass and the fans cheer very loudly as it sinks in. The camera quickly cuts back to the ring as Sheamus sneaks in behind Miz. Miz turns around and Sheamus nails him with a huge Brogue Kick to huge cheers from the crowd. Sheamus walks over to the ropes and is handed his World Heavyweight Championship, which he raises high in the air. He climbs to the second rope and raises the Championship in the air with both hands. He jumps down and turns around just to walk straight into Brock Lesnar. Lesnar lifts Sheamus up onto his shoulders and nails a big F5 onto him. Lesnar gets to his feet, laughing at the booing fans, and picks up the World Heavyweight Championship from the mat. Lesnar raises the Championship high in the air and stands over the fallen body of the World Heavyweight Champion as the show comes to a close]

Founder Posts : 1494

First point of review; I think you're putting shows up too fast. It's very hard for the reader to digest. I mean look at it this way as well; if you had have put RAW up tomorrow, the Smackdown on the Friday and the RAW the following Monday, you would've had an extra week to write future shows. If you follow this formula you can keep a couple of shows ahead at all times Smile

Hall of Famer Posts : 5979 Age : 27

I was actually going to do that but what I like to do when I am booking the WWE is do it in real time so that my shows are up to date with the real shows. This is mostly for my benefit as I like to compare the way I portray the characters with the way WWE portray them. I see where you are coming from but the shows will be more spaced out now as I have caught up with real time.

Champion Posts : 2401

loved the draft show! Sheamus and Bryan going to RAW were shocks to me, and Lesnar taking out Sheamus. this looks like a good feud indeed! favorite part was obviously Kane taking everyone out. good show man!

Hall of Famer Posts : 5979 Age : 27

Thanks Jigsaw, I wanted to put a little curve ball in with Lesnar attacking Sheamus so I hope that came across well.

Executive Posts : 3205 Age : 30 Location : Canada

I'm going to go read all the shows right after I write this homework down.

Hall of Famer Posts : 5979 Age : 27

Awesome, make sure to drop me a review!

Executive Posts : 3205 Age : 30 Location : Canada

For sure brotha!

Hall of Famer Posts : 5979 Age : 27

Also, four matches have been announced for Over The Limit so far so would you be able to make the banners when you get a chance?

Executive Posts : 3205 Age : 30 Location : Canada

Ricardo Rodriguez > God wrote:: Also, four matches have been announced for Over The Limit so far so would you be able to make the banners when you get a chance?

Yep, im working on em now.

Hall of Famer Posts : 5979 Age : 27

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It has just been announced that Big Show v Daniel Bryan at Over The Limit will now be for the Intercontinental Championship!

Hall of Famer Posts : 5979 Age : 27

Thanks man.

Executive Posts : 3205 Age : 30 Location : Canada

Not a Problem! Very Happy

Executive Posts : 1430 Age : 25 Location : Kansas City

I thought too many lower to midcarders were drafted even though there was only one. You could have saved Jackson for the supplemental draft. As for the other picks, I liked them. Don't like the fact that Ryder was drafted on TV, but he is a big crowd pleaser so WWE would probably actually do it. Sheamus and Bryan getting drafted was probably the coolest. I felt that you drafted too many of SD's big stars to Raw. Now who do they have besides Orton, Jericho, and Kane? Hopefully you push some guys/draft some shockers in the supplemental draft. Overall I'd give the draft portion a 6.2/10. But the show itself was a solid 8. I hope you keep doing this for a while and I'm glad you're back with a WWE booker.

Hall of Famer Posts : 5979 Age : 27

Cole wrote:: I thought too many lower to midcarders were drafted even though there was only one. You could have saved Jackson for the supplemental draft. As for the other picks, I liked them. Don't like the fact that Ryder was drafted on TV, but he is a big crowd pleaser so WWE would probably actually do it. Sheamus and Bryan getting drafted was probably the coolest. I felt that you drafted too many of SD's big stars to Raw. Now who do they have besides Orton, Rhodes, and Kane. Hopefully you push some guys/draft some shockers in the supplemental draft. Overall I'd give the draft portion a 6.2/10. But the show itself was a solid 8. I hope you keep doing this for a while and I'm glad you're back with a WWE booker.

Thanks for the review! Jackson was drafted on TV to try and get him back in the minds of the fans as I have plans for him. As for Smackdown's big stars getting drafted, I don't think that too many were drafted. Sheamus' draft was pretty much covered by Jericho's draft and the only other big star was Barrett. Although this may just be my opinion so I will definitely take your opinion into consideration.

Executive Posts : 3205 Age : 30 Location : Canada

[center]SP's Reviews

1) RAW: The Champ Rises .. Almost: A good opening show! It was great for setting up everything that is to come in the future, setting up storylines, etc. I enjoyed that Laurinatis made the Fatal 4-Way and you let Cena take the win. I'm rooting for the Cena/Jericho feud to be a hit. Speaking of Jericho, I didn't see much of him .. which really you'd think you would since he won, but hey this is the first show. I liked the One on One bouts aswell, showing off alot of action that RAW holds! Excellent job Karlito! A solid 8.3 out of 10!

2) Smackdown: The World's Strongest Victory: Again, a good opening show for Smackdown! A great show to set up all the storylines for whats to come. I liked how you made the rookies appear on Smackdown since NXT is done, and that you even put them against beasts and they managed to overcome the odds and win. The match I really enjoyed was Bateman and Curtis versus The Usos. Also, I liked how you put Booker back into the ring! I love that Henry will be challenging Sheamus now!

3) RAW: 2012 WWE Draft: The Draft was really good. I enjoy how you got the big names and the little names all out there at once. It shows that your going to be working with alittle of everyone from here on in. I liked Cena's promo and Booker T's match espically. I liked that you brang Kingston to Smackdown, McIntyre to RAW, Jericho to Smackdown, Barrett to RAW, Bryan to RAW and Sheamus to RAW. I think Smackdown could of used another big guy or so, just to kinda even things out .. but all and all, the draft was great! I'm so pumped to see what you've got going on with Lesnar and Sheamus!

* NOTE: I didn't think Extreme Rules needed to be reviewed lol. Sorry this is rather short Razz

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