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Revolution X Wrestling
2/1/13 Review
Promo 1
Pretty standard opening with the authority figure starting things off for the new promotion. Not that I think there is anything wrong with it as it's the first segment of a new fed and a welcoming is in order but I just feel the very first segment of a new promotion should be used as a catalyst to propel a feud. Also you have a chairman/GM combination. I think the only reason to have two authority figures is for a heel/face balancing and they both seem to be faces? Although it is extremely early days so that could quite quickly change. Regardless Rhodes versus Sheamus is a big opening match.

Match 1
Simple heel tactic by Cody with the fake handshake to get some cheap heat from the fans and it instantly solidifies him as a heel. I like the fact that you're playing Cody up as a heel with his backing-off. I'd say IRL this would be about ten minutes into the actual show and people would already have a strong dislike for Cody. It's just simple actions like this so early on that make me think Cody will be a big player in your promotion. The match in itself was alright. Probably what you'd expect from these two in a free-TV match. Sheamus looked good, Cody looked okay but it was the mannerisms of Cody that have me interested in him. Face should always win the very first match in company history.

Segment 1
Madison Rayne being focused on a bit here. Although it's simplistic and short it has a nice touch with Madison not looking directly into the camera rather she focuses on herself in the mirror. Simple but it gets over two huge things; Madison Rayne is playing a vain heel character and Madison Rayne will definitely be in the Women's Championship shake-up.

Match 2
I don't particularly like The World's Greatest Tag Team but I give everybody a fresh slate in bookers because they could be booked entirely different. Fairly okay match, bit of a glorified squash I reckon. You've put over an extreme use of suplexes on behalf of TWGTT perhaps playing into their athlete and pure wrestling gimmicks. The after-match stuff was alright I suppose. Was kinda hoping from something different than the 'we don't care about anyone we just want the tag team titles' approach.

Promo 2
This has been by far my favourite part of the show so far. You've established Robbie E as a heel, you put over RXW as a company, you played into Robbie's gimmick. E is seriously underutilized in real life so I'm looking forward to seeing how he gets on.

Match 3
Great stuff again by Robbie E. I'm loving this character. Oh. Squash. I suppose this is okay if Kane's going to be a main-event player but it's a bit disappointing to see E get steam-rolled after such effective use.

Segment 2
Now we're getting a bit juicy. Abyss versus Kane is like a dream nerd internet feud. Simple reason - RXW ain't big enough for both of us. I'd love this to be a slow-burner which comes to a head at one of your big PPV's in a Loser Leaves Town match or something! Feud writes itself, if you do this right it could be a contender for feud of the year.

Segment 3
Cody take two here, again brilliant mannerisms selling the strength of Sheamus. See I think we encounter a problem here with the way you write segments and promos; "Cody begins yelling and demanding respect." This leaves the reader quite confused as to what's going on. So much more could of been done with that bit. So after Cody yells at the two authority figures, claims he's more worthy of respect than both of them and has just gotten his ass handed to him by Sheamus . . . he gets what is basically a number one contenders match against The Undertaker? That doesn't sit right with me, surely Sheamus should be getting the match?

Match 4
I've no real opinion on Bennett or DiBiase, interested to see how you use them. I like that he has a valet in Maria, I'm sensing a heel and it also allows for some interesting storylines involving Maria. Even exchange, you definitely worked hard to make sure these two men stayed looking strong. Bennett's definitely heel I've picked that much up. Seems to be an old-school kind of guy, female valet, suplexes and slams and eye pokes. I'm liking Bennett and I think due to the finish these two could have a rematch. Maybe even on PPV.

Segment 4
Nice establishment of Bennett's heel status and also solidification of his relationship with Maria. What's this Maddox thing about? First time you've got me wondering about something.

Segment 5
Sounds like a good match but what the hell? Sheamus beats Rhodes fairly handily and he's put in a match for the Television Championship. Not even a one on one match but a four-way match. So Sheamus basically has a 25% chance of winning the Television Championship while the guy he beat has a number one contendership match for the World Championship? This is really strange too me. Sheamus surely can't just accept that? He has to at least have something to say?

Promo 3
Madison Rayne is a cool character you have going. Her vain heel gimmick is working a treat. I love, love, love the fact that she seems to prioritise being the Queen of RXW over the Women's Championship. It's like she sees the Women's championship as just a little something extra you get with being Queen. Fairly standard baby-face reaction from AJ Lee. Does the intended job, big heel v face dynamic going into this one.

Match 5
A very well-written match that allowed both women to show they're on level footing with each other and it allowed both of them to flaunt their move-sets off quite a bit. Again your decision to put AJ Lee over baffles me. Madison Rayne was built up big time throughout the show and then she just loses to AJ? It's confusing to say the least. Why not give AJ the earlier segment if you were building her up to win?

Segment 6
Nice segment by Kane but this should've been held off on until next week in my opinion. Don't jump the gun with this feud. Let it build. Roode, Sandow, Orton, Miz, Rhyno. There are a ton of options you could've went with here. How about we hear what Sheamus thinks about the raw deal he's been cut? But don't get me wrong, good segment just wished we had have got it next week.

Match 6
I'm a huge fan of both of these guys. I've absolutely no complaint about the match quality, it was very good. Is Aries heel or tweener or face though?

Overall
It is a good show especially on the surface. Don't think I'm being harsh in my review, I think this feedback is pointless without constructive criticism. I don't really give ratings for shows so I'm not going to say like 8/10 or whatever I just give my opinions and 3 highlights and lowlights.

Highlights;
1.Character traits and mannerisms
2.Main Event
3.Treatment of women

Lowlights;
1.Illogical decisions
2.Lack of storylines
3.Cody Rhodes backstage segment

Favourtie Characters
1.Madison Rayne
2.Robbie E
3.Mike Bennett

Least Favourite Characters
1.The World's Greatest Tag Team
2.Paul Heyman
3.Sheamus

Adam I really appreciate this review! I myself have even looked at some stuff for my first two shows and be like "wait i should have approached this different" And to answer your question. Aries is a heel.

Jigsaw* wrote:

Adam I really appreciate this review! I myself have even looked at some stuff for my first two shows and be like "wait i should have approached this different" And to answer your question. Aries is a heel.

Sweet it's probably established but I'm only going off the main event of the first show, I'll review your second show after I review Mesa's, SP's and Granger's first show!

I'll also be reviewing shows that I've yet to do reviews for later on today!

Elite Wrestling Council: Showcase
5/1/13 Review
Promo 1
Edge is a nice choice for General Manager and I'm happy to see you've gone the route of having one clear distinguishible authority figure. Putting over Cena and EWC from the very start, happy that Angle interupted could be the fuel for some more interactions between Edge and Angle further down the road. Blockbuster main event which incorporates four of your biggest stars with a clear motivational reason for co-existing and winning. I'm sure the story of the night will be about Angle/Anderson struggling to co-exist. Also nice dig at the competition in the opening line

Match 1
A fresh, fast tag team match to start things off. I like this decision as I don't think a singles match should start a company . . . I don't know why I just think it puts the spotlight too much on the two competitors. As for the match it is what it is. It seems even enough. Surely MCMG will be in contention for the championships now? You could've made a big deal out of MCMG being from Detroit where your show took place.

Segment 1
I think you've done the right thing by mentioning the dissension in the ranks but I would've made more out of this.

Match 2
This match gives a little something more. Veteran versus the youngster and I love the fact that you mentioned Haskins had to push hard to keep up with Mysterio and that a botch - inexperience - nearly led to his downfall. A masked man? Cliche but we've got our first feud on our hands I think. Morrison! Nice debut! Morrison v Mysterio entices me.

Segment 2
Ah it appears I jumped the gun earlier. You put over Cryme Tyme and give MCMG some more air-time. I reckon MCMG will be the first tag team champions. I'm liking that they've set themselves the challenge of beating every other team, nice twist to the usual 'I want title match'. Again though really think you could be playing into the Detroit thing.

Segment 3
Mtfo. This is great. Video packages aren't used nearly enough in wrestling especially in bookers. Archer and Harris sound like a great team! Gimmick seems fun. This is who I want as tag champs now. Favourite part so far.

Match 3
Seems like a random four-way here. It seems Creed and MVP are the focus. I don't know but it feels Finlay and Slater weren't needed here unless your building to a potential PPV match, in which case you don't want to spoil it on free TV. Three matches in and twice we've had the veteran versus rookie angle. But a dubious decision means this has more gas left in the tank. Not bad.

Segment 4
Unusual segment so props for that. I wonder if any of them superstars will clash in the future...? Heath Slater just had a match bro Morrison's coming off as a right jerk but you have me confused. Is Morrison going to feud with Christian? Why would he randomly attack Rey? To make a statement? I doubt Rey is going to take that lying down. Three-way feud? Or maybe I'm looking at this wrong and you're just building Morrison up as this ultimate heel. Either way you've got me asking questions.

Match 4
Nothing I can say about the actual match. This was more of an angle. I have a feeling you could be going with an 'I'm better than this' angle with Hardy which would be cool. I reckon Noble is just a pawn, nothing major planned for him.

Segment 5
I enjoyed this segment. I groaned at the start thinking MVP would just complain to Edge and be awarded a match with Creed next week or something but this Mr Late Nite character intrigues me. He put his potential assistance over big style. I'm hoping for MVP to accept and have a short feud with Creed before powering on.

Match 5
No idea who Danielle is so I suppose it felt right reading her as the underdog. I definitely would have given her a segment at least to get her character across a bit. Another upset win, there's been three tonight if you count Noble beating Hardy.

Segment 6
Good, good segment. You waited a while to introduce AJ and Cena but I'm positive the faces will take the win and you've already sparked a little bit of tension for Ignition between the two.

Match 6
Sounds like it was an okay match. I think Cena is the strongest and Anderson is the weakest out of the four so you got who makes and takes the pin right anyway. As I predicted faces win, tension continues to build and I think AJ and Cena facing off with the logo and Heavyweight Championship match flashing under them would be a really cool end to the first show.

Overall
I enjoyed the show it just feels to be lacking ... something? I know that's not helpful but it's the only way I can describe it. Solid foundations though.

Highlights
1) Video Package
2) John Morrison's motives
3) Cena/AJ dynamic

Lowlights
1) Angle/Anderson not built upon nearly enough
2) Similar angles within matches
3) Not many people have a clear alignment at this point

Favourite Characters
1) John Morrison
2) Mr Late Nite
3) MCMG

Least Favourite Characters
1) Mr Anderson
2) Rey Mysterio
3) Matt Hardy

Ignition Predictions So Far
Cena v Styles - Confirmed
MVP w/Late Nite v Creed - Confident
John Morrison v Christian - Confident
Mysterio v Haskins - Possibility
Danielle/Kelly Kelly v Beautiful People OR a 4way - Likely
MCMG v Harris/Archer - Likely
Angle v Hardy? - Doubtful, this is a guess

Thanks for the review Adam, very classily done. I know you don't like Hardy now, but I think his character will intrigue you eventually. Also, I had an "EWC.com update" that announced Mysterio has been injured by Morrison and will be out atleast past Ignition, so if that answers any questions about Morrison's dynamic in the show...

Mesa wrote:

Thanks for the review Adam, very classily done. I know you don't like Hardy now, but I think his character will intrigue you eventually. Also, I had an "EWC.com update" that announced Mysterio has been injured by Morrison and will be out atleast past Ignition so if that answers any questions about Morrison's dynamic in the show...

That it does!!

My show probably won't be up until the morning sometime, hope that's okay? Although I'm babysitting so providing the kid doesn't wake up I may be able to hammer it out tonight.

No feedback for Granger

Not a problem Adam, I'm in the same boat (although I'm grandpa-sitting instead.)

SP's next on the list Granger!!

I''ve gotten no feedback yet either haha.

Adam wrote:

SP's next on the list Granger!!

I''ve gotten no feedback yet either haha.

haha i have plans of giving feedback later

You boys quit playing with each other and you'll get your reviews from Moi tomorrow.

Wrestling Grand Prix
7/1/13 Review
Promo 1
I see you've went with the dual-authority figure role. As I stated not a fan of this but Triple H and Vickie Guerrero is almost certainly going to be a face/heel dynamic which is pretty cool in my book. Hmm well you've changed that to McGuinness. McGuinness has a long history of being a kick-ass heel but I feel you'll have face McGuinness. I think it'd be more appropriate for Nigel to mention his fairly good TNA run and mention he's a World Champion from ROH rather than just say he used to work in a 'small-promotion'. At least this opening promo has a purpose - the Grand Prix Tournemant. I'm intrigued by some of the guys involved and I like the fact it's a 16-man tournament rather than a standard 8-man. Some good and bad in here, very decent start.

Match 1
It's been a while since either man has done anything mainstream so maybe a segment may have been in order but both are relatively well known so it should be alright. Fast action in the match, both men looked strong with Bourne only losing due to a mishap. Could've gone either way. Nice start.

Segment 1
Nice. You've both characters down pat. You've achieved a lot in this segment; Kyle O'Reilly established as a heel, a potential feud in the works with O'Reilly and Ryder and most importantly O'Reilly has an angle - get into the tourney.

Segment 2
The segment's alright as a way to set up next weeks main event but I don't agree with just throwing a stipulation match in there when the rest can qualify through straight-up singles competition. Steen/Storm hasn't got my mouth watering but it should be an above average bout. Good for a TV Main Event. Think you could've done much more with the character of Storm.

Match 2
I'm invested in this match because of the earlier segment and to your credit it's a damn hard thing to do to get a reader invested in only your second ever match. It was even but you made O'Reilly look a bit stronger which is a good thing as I can see O'Reilly achieving far more success in WGP than Ryder. You really established O'Reilly as a heel with the after-match antics and I honestly think we'll get an O'Reilly/Ryder feud further down the line.

Segment 3
Random attack seems random but that's the way of The Shield. I can only imagine they're trying to take out some of the competition in the Grand Prix tourney. AH! Kyle O'Reilly. You've got something good going with this guy. He's not even in the tournament but I can see him in the final somehow.

Segment 4
Mission accomplished.

Match 3
I'd imagine a squash with Briscoes and The Colons but I was pleasantly surprised to see The Colons make a go of it. Not happy to see a traditionally weak heel tag team cleanly beat a strong face tag team? Who is the woman I wonder? Mendes?

Segment 5
I was excited about the interview with Y2J, a typically great talker. You cut it way too short with The Shield although I like the concept of them interupting and the reveal of Ambrose/Y2J. That'll be good.

Match 4
Quality match here, really enjoyed it. No complaints.

Segment 6
Okay announcing Chavo is out and I'm pretty chuffed Kyle has found his route into the tournament but the YouTube show? What YouTube show? I think you're better keeping it to the weeklies.

Segment 7
At least you're following up with the surprise Primo/Epico win. Nice to see Kendrick introduced. Basically you've spoiled London/O'Reilly by announcing this tag though.

Match 5
You follow up the last great match with another cracker. You're match-writing is superb in the last two bouts. You didn't create many memorable characters but I'm a huge supporter of both Cole and Titus simply from their performances in the matches.

Overall
Nice-looking show with a really good angle in O'Reilly. It's presented very well and some of your match writing is very good. A lot of substance is lacking though.

Highlights
1) The Kyle O'Reilly angle throughout the show; best angle I've read so far of any show
2) King v Titus
3) Main Event

Lowlights
1) Y2J's interview
2) Tag Team booking
3) Didn't create many strong characters on the inaugural show

Favourite Characters
1) Kyle O'Reilly
2) Kenny King
3) Adam Cole

Least Favourite Characters
1) Chris Jericho
2) Nigel McGuinness
3) James Storm

Well thanks Adam! I am going to use all of your review as insight to help me, as you are a great booker yourself. I understand everything that you've stated and will work on making those weakness' into strengths! Guess you'll have to wait and see what happens. As far as the YouTube Show goes, it was basically a way of giving some beef to this week, but after reading this I've decided to just do this week in Quick Results! Monday will feature my third week's show, because I started late! Thanks again for the review and expect some from me tomorrow <3

R-Truth has been granted his release from Wrestling Grand Prix, accepting a contract from Superstar Wrestling Entertainment.

Sorry SP just so you know Adam Cole was in my top three favourite stars it just didn't show up for some reason in the review!!

Adam wrote:

Sorry SP just so you know Adam Cole was in my top three favourite stars it just didn't show up for some reason in the review!!

Not a problem buddy! Thank you!

SP's EWC Review
~ The opening was great. A great introduction to the company. I'm excited to see what you have planned for Angle! A HUGE Main Event! Four Great Competitors! Angle and Anderson, Cena and AJ. I am looking forward to it!
~ MCMG pick up the win on Cryme Tyme! Good match, looking forward to a feud between the two.
~ An okay promo between Anderson and Angle, wish I would of seen more.
~ Mysterio vs. Haskins was a great match! MYSTERY MAN ATTACKS REY? INNOCENT REY?! Why? Who? JOMO!? THAT HOMO! >
~ Good interview from The Guns. They're looking pretty good for the first show.
~ Vance Archer and Husky Harris will be an interesting tag team. Would've liked to see it as Archer and Bray Wyatt, But that's just me.
~ The Fatal Four Way was good. A nice way to introduce the superstars. Creed picks up a nice win, looking forward to a feud with possibly MVP?
~ Christian sticking up for Rey, great to see. I hope Christian gets his hands on JoMo next week!
~ Hardy gets counted out? Hmmm? Possibly the Hardy/Edge hatred is still on the go?
~ Mr. Late Night and MVP? Interesting, I could see something great happening there though.
~ Nice win for Danielle in Divas Competition. Could of seen more after the match, but good action.
~ Tension between Cena and AJ? The Main Event is going to be SICK!
~ Cena and AJ pull off a win! And now will fight at Ignition! For the World Championship! Wiicked! This is going to be SICK!

Great Show Mesa. Overall it was good. I would of liked to see abit more out of promos and some color, making things pop. Overall though, the matches and writing was great. A solid 7/10! Can't wait until the next show and this whole John Morrison storyline has really got me hooked!

SP's Kanji Wrestling Review
~ Welcome Back Shamrock! I don't know much about him but, he was quite the superstar in the ol' Monday Night Wars. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing exactly what his role will be. THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENTS ADAM! -_- Anyone who tries to go against my word will b- BROCK LESNAR! F5 TO SHAMROCK! HA! HA! HA! Badass! Great opening Adam! That was classic.
~ A battle royal to determain a Champion is always great in my books! I love Battle Royals! Things are down to Kidd and McGillicutty! Kidd is going to be eliminated! NO! Michael goes out! KIDD WINS! Kidd has great potential and I noticed you're a favorite of him too. Now to decide the challenger?! I could see Kidd carrying great matches with pretty much anyone.
~ The Tournament looks great! I'm rooting for Joe in this one!
~ Speak of the Devil! He pulls off a win against Henry! Joe is gonna kill you.
~ KoW versus Hawkins and Reks is going to be sick. These two tag teams are going to make your division shine.
~ Tag Team Championship time! Generation Me versus Magnus and Burchill, and interesting team I must say! A great match! Magnus and Burchill pick up the win! Another great tag team that you've got.
~ Barrett and Regal is a Grade A Duo. I am very intrigued on what you've got going with Barrett?!
~ RVD DEFEATS BIG SHOW! THE WHOLE F'N SHOW ADVANCES! OH BUDDY! I'm pumped that RVD beat the Big Show. I really hate seeing RVD as an underclass Superstar, he deserves to be in the main eventers!
~ Bobby Heenan interviews who? I have no idea who Liger is .. awko. Liger is facing someone at The Dawn! RODERICK STRONG! I honestly have never seen a match come about like this. Very creative really. Strong versus Liger should be a good bout, I'll have to watch some of Ligers matches on Youtube.
~ Another classic pipebomb from Mr. Punk himself. Hoping for him to advance and face Joe in the finals :')
~ Bryan Danielson [glad you kept it classic] pulls out a win on The Animal. Amazing bout really. Enjoyed reading it, nothing bad about it really.
~ I like these promos of the tournamentors before their match. The Bully promo was gold.
~ CM Punk versus Bully Ray. I liked how you put those chants in there. Make you feel like your sitting right there. Punk hits a GTS! ONE! TWO! THREE! Punk advances! Really hoping this Punk/Joe thing happens!
~ Ending? RVD is leaving, oh god .. Barrett! Barrett attacks RVD D: Oh well, I like Barrett. A great ending to an amazing show Adam!

Overall the show was sick! Really looking forward to episode number 2, so Barrett can explain himself! Overall a solid 8/10 I wish I would've seen some more color but everyone has their own style. The writing was great mate, keep up the good work.

Tomorrow, G and Jigsaw will be Reviewed!