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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 1:22 am

Hazza wrote:
Marik, the Rapist wrote:
Hazza wrote:
Marik, the Rapist wrote:
Hazza wrote:
Harry Jones is chillin' with Surge in Danny D's house. Danny D wasn't invited o'course.

"And then Kevin Evans said that he is the future best in the world!"

Laughter all round! Surge responds by saying that ....

"Dustin Shore is going over Hardcore Demon for the title. Let's hope for a clean finish."

More laughter!
"Kevin Evans said that I am generic! What a hypocrite!"

You wouldn't believe how much of a party these rowdy boys are having tonight!

They stop laughing.

"Alright, alright, I have a real killer."

Harry looks at Surge, amped.

"...Brock."

THEY BURST OUT LAUGHING~!!
Harry stops laughing and looks slightly confused.

"Wait ... Is Brock the black one, the Arabic one, the Jewish one or the American one? I've seriously lost track.", says Harry whilst patting Danny D's cat.
Danny comes out from behidn the couch.

Danny: quit petting my pussy.
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 1:29 am

SuperByNature wrote:
Hazza wrote:
Marik, the Rapist wrote:
Hazza wrote:
Marik, the Rapist wrote:
Hazza wrote:
Harry Jones is chillin' with Surge in Danny D's house. Danny D wasn't invited o'course.

"And then Kevin Evans said that he is the future best in the world!"

Laughter all round! Surge responds by saying that ....

"Dustin Shore is going over Hardcore Demon for the title. Let's hope for a clean finish."

More laughter!
"Kevin Evans said that I am generic! What a hypocrite!"

You wouldn't believe how much of a party these rowdy boys are having tonight!

They stop laughing.

"Alright, alright, I have a real killer."

Harry looks at Surge, amped.

"...Brock."

THEY BURST OUT LAUGHING~!!
Harry stops laughing and looks slightly confused.

"Wait ... Is Brock the black one, the Arabic one, the Jewish one or the American one? I've seriously lost track.", says Harry whilst patting Danny D's cat.
Danny comes out from behidn the couch.

Danny: quit petting my pussy.

Harry Jones looks at Surge with a sour facial expression, before facepalming.

Harry Jones: "Seriously ... You have to leave, now. You're more of a buzz-kill than Buzz Killington!"

As Harry states this rather cryptically, Surge flicks the channel on Danny's TV to Family Guy on CBS! At this exact moment in time, the character of Buzz Killington is doing a transitional segment on the show. Harry and Surge both laugh together, before Danny D cuts them off.
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 1:41 am

Hazza wrote:
SuperByNature wrote:
Hazza wrote:
Marik, the Rapist wrote:
Hazza wrote:
Marik, the Rapist wrote:
Hazza wrote:
Harry Jones is chillin' with Surge in Danny D's house. Danny D wasn't invited o'course.

"And then Kevin Evans said that he is the future best in the world!"

Laughter all round! Surge responds by saying that ....

"Dustin Shore is going over Hardcore Demon for the title. Let's hope for a clean finish."

More laughter!
"Kevin Evans said that I am generic! What a hypocrite!"

You wouldn't believe how much of a party these rowdy boys are having tonight!

They stop laughing.

"Alright, alright, I have a real killer."

Harry looks at Surge, amped.

"...Brock."

THEY BURST OUT LAUGHING~!!
Harry stops laughing and looks slightly confused.

"Wait ... Is Brock the black one, the Arabic one, the Jewish one or the American one? I've seriously lost track.", says Harry whilst patting Danny D's cat.
Danny comes out from behidn the couch.

Danny: quit petting my pussy.

Harry Jones looks at Surge with a sour facial expression, before facepalming.

Harry Jones: "Seriously ... You have to leave, now. You're more of a buzz-kill than Buzz Killington!"

As Harry states this rather cryptically, Surge flicks the channel on Danny's TV to Family Guy on CBS! At this exact moment in time, the character of Buzz Killington is doing a transitional segment on the show. Harry and Surge both laugh together, before Danny D cuts them off.
Danny: who watches cbs?
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 1:51 am

SuperByNature wrote:
Hazza wrote:
SuperByNature wrote:
Hazza wrote:
Marik, the Rapist wrote:
Hazza wrote:
Marik, the Rapist wrote:
Hazza wrote:
Harry Jones is chillin' with Surge in Danny D's house. Danny D wasn't invited o'course.

"And then Kevin Evans said that he is the future best in the world!"

Laughter all round! Surge responds by saying that ....

"Dustin Shore is going over Hardcore Demon for the title. Let's hope for a clean finish."

More laughter!
"Kevin Evans said that I am generic! What a hypocrite!"

You wouldn't believe how much of a party these rowdy boys are having tonight!

They stop laughing.

"Alright, alright, I have a real killer."

Harry looks at Surge, amped.

"...Brock."

THEY BURST OUT LAUGHING~!!
Harry stops laughing and looks slightly confused.

"Wait ... Is Brock the black one, the Arabic one, the Jewish one or the American one? I've seriously lost track.", says Harry whilst patting Danny D's cat.
Danny comes out from behidn the couch.

Danny: quit petting my pussy.

Harry Jones looks at Surge with a sour facial expression, before facepalming.

Harry Jones: "Seriously ... You have to leave, now. You're more of a buzz-kill than Buzz Killington!"

As Harry states this rather cryptically, Surge flicks the channel on Danny's TV to Family Guy on CBS! At this exact moment in time, the character of Buzz Killington is doing a transitional segment on the show. Harry and Surge both laugh together, before Danny D cuts them off.
Danny: who watches cbs?
Harry Jones: "Really? I gave you so much to work with, and that was the best you could congure in that pea-sized brain of yours? No wonder everybody hates you. Isn't that right, Surge?"

Surge: "Yeah."

Harry Jones: "Surge says yeah! Now, you best be leaving."
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 4:02 am


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Devin Smith

(Devin Smith is seen lacing up his boots and preparing for his grudge match against Ramon Rocque at Fight or Die and turns and stands in front of the camera in his locker room.)

Listen to me Ramon Rocque! I am the one and only party-starter! I am the Assassin to Hollywood wannabes! I am not some cocky flash in the pan who talks too much shit. I beat you last Wednesday on Revolution and I will do it again at Fight or Die! I'm Devin Smith and you are nothing but another so-called monster who can't wrestle and needs phenomenal wrestlers like myself to carry you throughout every match and put you over so you can have a big career in CWW while guys like me end up being thrown to the side until another guy needs to be put over.I am not going to go down like CWW management wants,I will out-fight you,out-wrestle you,and most importantly out-smart you! I know something Ramon Rocque knows that no one else does! The most humiliating thing that even I couldn't make you do,You did it on your own. Roll the clip!"

(The following clip appears on the Tron and on Television screens.)



(The screen shows Devin Smith again smiling.)

"I know what you are all thinking! Ramon Rocque likes balls? Ramon Rocque has emotions? Ramon Rocque has gone soft!? no he didn't go soft,he has always been that way! He's no monster,he is nothing but a little faggot bitch! Thanks to my good friend Adam Sandler for sending me that clip. After you saw that now who do you think is gonna win at Fight or Die? Yeah you might wanna change your bets ladies and gentleman!"

(Devin Smith pushes the camera and the screen fades to dark.)

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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 4:36 am

*Josh Polson heads backstage after Accelaration to head just up the road because they were already in Philly, along the way he sees many a "Best in the World" T-Shirt*
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 5:49 am

ozziewwefan101 (Polsy) wrote:
*Josh Polson heads backstage after Accelaration to head just up the road because they were already in Philly, along the way he sees many a "Best in the World" T-Shirt*

Eric Lindgren approaches him.

EL: Hey, good win tonight, Josh, and good luck against Lionel Deathshot. He's one tough SOB.
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 6:39 am

[Hunter J kicks open Black's door]

"BLACK!!! Get your ass out here"

[Hunter searches around Black's room]
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 9:15 am

John TPA wrote:
[Hunter J kicks open Black's door]

"BLACK!!! Get your ass out here"

[Hunter searches around Black's room]

Hunter searches, but Black is nowhere to be seen.
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 9:35 am

{Mark "Razor" Jones is standing backstage waiting til Rob Black shows up, so that he can talk about some important business with him}
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 9:45 am

Sam And The Dirt Is Gone wrote:
{Mark "Razor" Jones is standing backstage waiting til Rob Black shows up, so that he can talk about some important business with him}

Rob Black hurriedly turns the corner, trying to escape the arena before Hunter J can find him.
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 9:54 am

The Truth Has Set Me Free wrote:
Sam And The Dirt Is Gone wrote:
{Mark "Razor" Jones is standing backstage waiting til Rob Black shows up, so that he can talk about some important business with him}

Rob Black hurriedly turns the corner, trying to escape the arena before Hunter J can find him.

{Mark "Razor" Jones steps in front of him and stops him in his track, shaking his head whilst doing so}

Mark "Razor" Jones

The number one rule as a General Manager is that you never pick a fight with any of your superstars because things will get nasty real quickly, but I guess you'll have to learn from your mistake unless you give me another shot at The Acceleration Championship because if I remember correctly my rematch didn't go down too well last time and should have resulted in me getting another one... So does the Acceleration after Fight or Die sound good to you?
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 9:57 am

Sam And The Dirt Is Gone wrote:
The Truth Has Set Me Free wrote:
Sam And The Dirt Is Gone wrote:
{Mark "Razor" Jones is standing backstage waiting til Rob Black shows up, so that he can talk about some important business with him}

Rob Black hurriedly turns the corner, trying to escape the arena before Hunter J can find him.

{Mark "Razor" Jones steps in front of him and stops him in his track, shaking his head whilst doing so}

Mark "Razor" Jones

The number one rule as a General Manager is that you never pick a fight with any of your superstars because things will get nasty real quickly, but I guess you'll have to learn from your mistake unless you give me another shot at The Acceleration Championship because if I remember correctly my rematch didn't go down too well last time and should have resulted in me getting another one... So does the Acceleration after Fight or Die sound good to you?

Rob: If you'll get out of my way, then sure, whatever.
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 10:10 am

The Truth Has Set Me Free wrote:
Sam And The Dirt Is Gone wrote:
The Truth Has Set Me Free wrote:
Sam And The Dirt Is Gone wrote:
{Mark "Razor" Jones is standing backstage waiting til Rob Black shows up, so that he can talk about some important business with him}

Rob Black hurriedly turns the corner, trying to escape the arena before Hunter J can find him.

{Mark "Razor" Jones steps in front of him and stops him in his track, shaking his head whilst doing so}

Mark "Razor" Jones

The number one rule as a General Manager is that you never pick a fight with any of your superstars because things will get nasty real quickly, but I guess you'll have to learn from your mistake unless you give me another shot at The Acceleration Championship because if I remember correctly my rematch didn't go down too well last time and should have resulted in me getting another one... So does the Acceleration after Fight or Die sound good to you?

Rob: If you'll get out of my way, then sure, whatever.

{Mark moves to the side, but not before whispering something in Rob's ear "Don't worry, I'll deal with Hunter for you". Jones then walks off towards where Black came from leaving him all alone in the corridor.}
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 10:29 am

Sam And The Dirt Is Gone wrote:
The Truth Has Set Me Free wrote:
Sam And The Dirt Is Gone wrote:
The Truth Has Set Me Free wrote:
Sam And The Dirt Is Gone wrote:
{Mark "Razor" Jones is standing backstage waiting til Rob Black shows up, so that he can talk about some important business with him}

Rob Black hurriedly turns the corner, trying to escape the arena before Hunter J can find him.

{Mark "Razor" Jones steps in front of him and stops him in his track, shaking his head whilst doing so}

Mark "Razor" Jones

The number one rule as a General Manager is that you never pick a fight with any of your superstars because things will get nasty real quickly, but I guess you'll have to learn from your mistake unless you give me another shot at The Acceleration Championship because if I remember correctly my rematch didn't go down too well last time and should have resulted in me getting another one... So does the Acceleration after Fight or Die sound good to you?

Rob: If you'll get out of my way, then sure, whatever.

{Mark moves to the side, but not before whispering something in Rob's ear "Don't worry, I'll deal with Hunter for you". Jones then walks off towards where Black came from leaving him all alone in the corridor.}

Rob smiles, before escaping to the car park and driving away from the arena to prepare for his match at the PPV.
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 10:32 am

The "Prophet" Dean wrote:

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Devin Smith

(Devin Smith is seen lacing up his boots and preparing for his grudge match against Ramon Rocque at Fight or Die and turns and stands in front of the camera in his locker room.)

Listen to me Ramon Rocque! I am the one and only party-starter! I am the Assassin to Hollywood wannabes! I am not some cocky flash in the pan who talks too much shit. I beat you last Wednesday on Revolution and I will do it again at Fight or Die! I'm Devin Smith and you are nothing but another so-called monster who can't wrestle and needs phenomenal wrestlers like myself to carry you throughout every match and put you over so you can have a big career in CWW while guys like me end up being thrown to the side until another guy needs to be put over.I am not going to go down like CWW management wants,I will out-fight you,out-wrestle you,and most importantly out-smart you! I know something Ramon Rocque knows that no one else does! The most humiliating thing that even I couldn't make you do,You did it on your own. Roll the clip!"

(The following clip appears on the Tron and on Television screens.)



(The screen shows Devin Smith again smiling.)

"I know what you are all thinking! Ramon Rocque likes balls? Ramon Rocque has emotions? Ramon Rocque has gone soft!? no he didn't go soft,he has always been that way! He's no monster,he is nothing but a little faggot bitch! Thanks to my good friend Adam Sandler for sending me that clip. After you saw that now who do you think is gonna win at Fight or Die? Yeah you might wanna change your bets ladies and gentleman!"

(Devin Smith pushes the camera and the screen fades to dark.)

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Feedback please?
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 10:41 am

The "Prophet" Dean wrote:
The "Prophet" Dean wrote:

CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 SmithBanner

Devin Smith

(Devin Smith is seen lacing up his boots and preparing for his grudge match against Ramon Rocque at Fight or Die and turns and stands in front of the camera in his locker room.)

Listen to me Ramon Rocque! I am the one and only party-starter! I am the Assassin to Hollywood wannabes! I am not some cocky flash in the pan who talks too much shit. I beat you last Wednesday on Revolution and I will do it again at Fight or Die! I'm Devin Smith and you are nothing but another so-called monster who can't wrestle and needs phenomenal wrestlers like myself to carry you throughout every match and put you over so you can have a big career in CWW while guys like me end up being thrown to the side until another guy needs to be put over.I am not going to go down like CWW management wants,I will out-fight you,out-wrestle you,and most importantly out-smart you! I know something Ramon Rocque knows that no one else does! The most humiliating thing that even I couldn't make you do,You did it on your own. Roll the clip!"

(The following clip appears on the Tron and on Television screens.)



(The screen shows Devin Smith again smiling.)

"I know what you are all thinking! Ramon Rocque likes balls? Ramon Rocque has emotions? Ramon Rocque has gone soft!? no he didn't go soft,he has always been that way! He's no monster,he is nothing but a little faggot bitch! Thanks to my good friend Adam Sandler for sending me that clip. After you saw that now who do you think is gonna win at Fight or Die? Yeah you might wanna change your bets ladies and gentleman!"

(Devin Smith pushes the camera and the screen fades to dark.)

OT-Feedback?
Feedback please?

It's OK, but you mix up kayfabe and reality in your promo. You say Ramon needs people to put him over, indicating that wrestling isn't real, but then say you'll out-fight him, which indicates it is. Might need to watch that.
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 10:45 am

The Truth Has Set Me Free wrote:
The "Prophet" Dean wrote:
The "Prophet" Dean wrote:

CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 SmithBanner

Devin Smith

(Devin Smith is seen lacing up his boots and preparing for his grudge match against Ramon Rocque at Fight or Die and turns and stands in front of the camera in his locker room.)

Listen to me Ramon Rocque! I am the one and only party-starter! I am the Assassin to Hollywood wannabes! I am not some cocky flash in the pan who talks too much shit. I beat you last Wednesday on Revolution and I will do it again at Fight or Die! I'm Devin Smith and you are nothing but another so-called monster who can't wrestle and needs phenomenal wrestlers like myself to carry you throughout every match and put you over so you can have a big career in CWW while guys like me end up being thrown to the side until another guy needs to be put over.I am not going to go down like CWW management wants,I will out-fight you,out-wrestle you,and most importantly out-smart you! I know something Ramon Rocque knows that no one else does! The most humiliating thing that even I couldn't make you do,You did it on your own. Roll the clip!"

(The following clip appears on the Tron and on Television screens.)



(The screen shows Devin Smith again smiling.)

"I know what you are all thinking! Ramon Rocque likes balls? Ramon Rocque has emotions? Ramon Rocque has gone soft!? no he didn't go soft,he has always been that way! He's no monster,he is nothing but a little faggot bitch! Thanks to my good friend Adam Sandler for sending me that clip. After you saw that now who do you think is gonna win at Fight or Die? Yeah you might wanna change your bets ladies and gentleman!"

(Devin Smith pushes the camera and the screen fades to dark.)

OT-Feedback?
Feedback please?

It's OK, but you mix up kayfabe and reality in your promo. You say Ramon needs people to put him over, indicating that wrestling isn't real, but then say you'll out-fight him, which indicates it is. Might need to watch that.

You also forgot to add that the Video part was fucking stupid
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PostSubject: Re: CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling)   CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 11:07 am

The Truth Has Set Me Free wrote:
The "Prophet" Dean wrote:
The "Prophet" Dean wrote:

CWW 21.0 (Created World Wrestling) - Page 3 SmithBanner

Devin Smith

(Devin Smith is seen lacing up his boots and preparing for his grudge match against Ramon Rocque at Fight or Die and turns and stands in front of the camera in his locker room.)

Listen to me Ramon Rocque! I am the one and only party-starter! I am the Assassin to Hollywood wannabes! I am not some cocky flash in the pan who talks too much shit. I beat you last Wednesday on Revolution and I will do it again at Fight or Die! I'm Devin Smith and you are nothing but another so-called monster who can't wrestle and needs phenomenal wrestlers like myself to carry you throughout every match and put you over so you can have a big career in CWW while guys like me end up being thrown to the side until another guy needs to be put over.I am not going to go down like CWW management wants,I will out-fight you,out-wrestle you,and most importantly out-smart you! I know something Ramon Rocque knows that no one else does! The most humiliating thing that even I couldn't make you do,You did it on your own. Roll the clip!"

(The following clip appears on the Tron and on Television screens.)



(The screen shows Devin Smith again smiling.)

"I know what you are all thinking! Ramon Rocque likes balls? Ramon Rocque has emotions? Ramon Rocque has gone soft!? no he didn't go soft,he has always been that way! He's no monster,he is nothing but a little faggot bitch! Thanks to my good friend Adam Sandler for sending me that clip. After you saw that now who do you think is gonna win at Fight or Die? Yeah you might wanna change your bets ladies and gentleman!"

(Devin Smith pushes the camera and the screen fades to dark.)

OT-Feedback?
Feedback please?

It's OK, but you mix up kayfabe and reality in your promo. You say Ramon needs people to put him over, indicating that wrestling isn't real, but then say you'll out-fight him, which indicates it is. Might need to watch that.

Okay.I willmake sure it doesn't happen again.
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A+ for creativity.
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Don't forget spaces after full stops, add a little more context too a guess
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Hazza wrote:
A+ for creativity.
Yay! I pass!
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Jericho wrote:
Don't forget spaces after full stops, add a little more context too a guess
OT-Thank you for the tips.
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(Devin Smith is sitting on a crate watching that funny clip of Ramon Rocque singing and crying in the car.)
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The "Prophet" Dean wrote:
(Devin Smith is sitting on a crate watching that funny clip of Ramon Rocque singing and crying in the car.)

Cayne-ine walks by and spits on Dean. Then throws a brick at the TV

"Happy Easter"
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